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Abigail Nussbaum's avatar

Ortegas's behavior isn't due to a Gorn infestation (that's Batel). It's lingering trauma from being nearly killed by a Gorn (and, as alluded to in this episode, from the Klingon war). I thought the episode handled this issue quite well (and certainly in comparison to the trailing threads of "Under the Cloak of War", but more on that in a minute). Ortegas has always been brash and combative, so having her cross the line into open (well, stealthy) insubordination is both in character and deeply disturbing.

Nor do I agree that Una ignores the seriousness of the violation. The basic conceit of Star Trek has always been that its ships operate with much looser discipline than the actual naval vessels they were based on, and in exchange their officers are extremely deferential to the chain of command. Ortegas breaking that contract is something that both Una and La'an are clearly disturbed by, and her punishment - visibly being removed from her station and forced to take remedial training - isn't meant to be punitive but humiliating, because what she has done is something a Starfleet officer shouldn't be capable of. And, it's clear from how the dressing down scene ends that this is not the end of the story.

Also, I just categorically and completely disagree with your characterization of "Under the Cloak of War". To me it epitomizes the core failure of NuTrek: to wit, that the neoliberal gen Xers currently running the franchise are constitutionally incapable of grasping the post-war liberalism that underpins it. Their idea of liberalism is soft-hearted and gullible, easily fobbed off by buzzwords like "peace" and "forgiveness", with the only alternative to mindless acceptance of the empty promises of a would-be guru being cold-blooded murder. TNG would have done the whole thing a hundred times more intelligently: Rah would have been a genuinely compelling character; Picard would have investigated him himself; the question of whether to expose a liar and risk derailing his mission of peace would have been given the serious consideration it deserved; and a murderer would not have been permitted to remain on the Enterprise. Frankly, if the follow-up in "Shuttle to Kenfori" feels unsatisfying, that seems to me like further confirmation that the original episode was too shallow to support its pretensions. The reason Pike can't address the fact that his CMO and old friend is a murderer is that, when you boil it down to its essentials, the people currently running Star Trek think that being a murderer is cool.

Hauss Reinbold's avatar

yeah, the over-reliance on references to other movies/sci-fi continues to be a weak spot on the show, especially when it's not so much a nod to something as a straight-up re-imagining that should have mentioned the source material in the credits. It's not quite plagiarism but it still feels like cribbing someone else's work because you don't know how to do it yourself. Really looking forward to the day trek has less hacky writers again.

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